O K. I forgot to mention it is quite a long poem. I think you will like it but I feel you may say it needs further work although you might say it's finished. I feel confident enough to say it's a good poem. I think when you get reading it you will be able to tell the amount of thought and time I put into it, getting the correct words to match the situation. I spent many hours with my thesaurus book. I doubt very much if you've ever come across a poem like this one, it probably won't be quite what you're expecting.