Well I don't want to post it on the forum as I want to enter it in a competition at some point, there's plenty of them. You could tell me if you thought I had a chance or if you think it still needs working on. Could I pm it? Is it totally safe to use the p m system? I can't type it today and I may have to post it over a few days as time is called for to type it up. I would appreciate your opinion. Last year I sent Rainy and Refreshed a poem, can't remember it now but Rainy said I had put a lot of work into it, I think it was called The Refreshing Rainy Bird. I can't post it as it was a present to them, maybe one of them would post it on here. It's a bit like asking can you share your Christmas present.
The poem I want you to look at is about three years old now. I put a lot of thought into the poem. Im just not getting time anymore to write them and I like writing them.