Re: Breath air ion

Aye I like you signed the piece like a letter to us

The beginning was grippiong, while allowing us to uphold analogy isn't all or it could lead to drowning, but that's my mind. yet, your piece, took us to the hypersensitive awareness as when we're sick or try not to be by not squandering our shallow or large existence on shores of elasticity questions.

So the last line has systemic qualities mentioned almost, as though curious if we could be humbly towards happiness appreciating generalities that don't have to be rated with all control in order to not yet be taken for granted about what is 'set' before us to work with and maybe stretch.

I liked the waves feference as it was tied to what bounces us back to title and our tides of storming or just steady interaction is inherent if the ions are what makes sweet or could, [as well as oxygen for effect or riled up]. So, patience is in the time somewhat.

I wasn't a very good reader along the pronoun parts of she, unless I don't like to guess. I think hugely lately of looking forward to watching unassisted first air from a mother moment. Then's there's the begotton that shouldn't be so tough either --

I hope I didn't consider what you provided too soon while you were wanting any tweaking,
Carolyn

P.S. saw your comments on eggs that were on mainintaining as is without ccmplaint, and I had an inquiry I might pass that way


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