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Spoken word poems from Your Enchanted Gardener
Spoken word poems from Your Enchanted Gardener
Date: 4/14/2014 10:31:51 AM ( 10 y ) ... viewed 9400 times Spoken word poems from Your Enchanted Gardener
ORIGINAL VERSION
I've made a decision not to hold back anything. I've decided to tell everything I'm feeling, not just the good stuff I'm feeling. I've decided to share myself, all of myself, because that truly is everything I am. What I am doesn't belong just to me. It belongs to everyone because I belong to everyone. I can't hold back myself from giving until what I have to give is all sweet and clean. It's the very of giving that sweetens and cleans me.
Journal entry
January 8, 1980
I've made a decision
Paul Brenner liked this original version. I've had difficulty with some of the lines and change them or edited out different sentences over the years. This is likely the latest revised edition here
I've made a decision not to hold back anything. I've decided to tell everything I'm feeling, not just the good stuff I'm feeling. I've decided to share myself, all of myself, I can't hold back myself from giving until what I have to give is all sweet and clean. It's the very act of giving that sweetens and cleans me.
What to do with these middle lines?
What I am doesn't belong just to me. It belongs to everyone because I belong to everyone.
Journal entry
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