Spoken word poems from Your Enchanted Gardener

Date:   4/14/2014 10:31:51 AM ( 10 y ago)

Spoken word poems from Your Enchanted Gardener

ORIGINAL VERSION

I've made a decision not to hold back anything. I've decided to tell everything I'm feeling, not just the good stuff I'm feeling. I've decided to share myself, all of myself, because that truly is everything I am. What I am doesn't belong just to me. It belongs to everyone because I belong to everyone. I can't hold back myself from giving until what I have to give is all sweet and clean. It's the very of giving that sweetens and cleans me.
Journal entry
January 8, 1980
I've made a decision

Paul Brenner liked this original version. I've had difficulty with some of the lines and change them or edited out different sentences over the years. This is likely the latest revised edition here


I've made a decision not to hold back anything. I've decided to tell everything I'm feeling, not just the good stuff I'm feeling. I've decided to share myself, all of myself, I can't hold back myself from giving until what I have to give is all sweet and clean. It's the very act of giving that sweetens and cleans me.



What to do with these middle lines?


What I am doesn't belong just to me. It belongs to everyone because I belong to everyone.


Journal entry

 

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