Re: one of my poems what do you think?? (Poetry Forum) 4/24/2004 561590

Re: one of my poems what do you think??

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It's publishable. I think it rides like a Lexus. Nice application of interlacing words with a solid rhyhtm to optimize the undercurrent of the verbs and adverbs. THe subject was well displayed. You did very fine art.

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