one of my poems what do you think??

I could have stumbled through you
Without ever knowing
I would have fallen over your feet
And kept on going
My gaze focused down
I would have walked right past
But there you were
Blocking my path

I hesitated, wishing to turn back
To find another way around
Helpless, it seemed I was moved forward
Unable to break away, to make a sound

Suddenly I became aware
That here it would all begin
I knew this desire that makes me lonely
With you, would come to it's end

All my dreams were there
Everything I had ever loved and lost
Flying above and about infusing me
Throwing me into the depths of chaos

Knowing I would never emerge unscathed
Since from the beginning I knew
No matter where it decided to drop me
I had to go with you---