Tom, could the pages of your website be narrowed?

...I see them as something like double the width of my screen, which makes for long laborious reading.

Short sentences and paragraphs help, too. You might like to ask your local authors' association who is available for feedback/editing/rewrite. They are a generous lot. Perhaps they will trade services for treatment.

(It's hard for me to suggest the above. You are a fine writer, and obviously sincere. But the average reader, if there is such a creature, tires easily if they have to 'dig' to understand. Everyone enjoys simple 'stories'...and laughter.)

I like your colors, text size, and the fact that you give quite thorough descriptions, up front. So many sites don't. Trying to hide their key 'secrets', I suppose. You don't.

Good photos, too.

I also like that you ask for any assistance anyone may offer.

Perhaps these few 'tweaks' may make a difference.

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