Overall I like the article a lot. Could use some polishing. I do particularly like your conclusion, especially the line:
"I would caution against seeing any healer or doctor who tells you not to fully explore your options."

Historically, traditional medicine is more at fault with this, but many holistic doctors/dentists are falling for this recently as well. There is a place for both, and a comprehensive approach is always better.

My best suggestion is, with what you seem to be trying to accomplish with this article, make sure you phrase your sentences to come from a completely neutral point of view.