Date:   2/15/2016 5:40:44 AM ( 8 y ago)
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Long sentences are fine, as long as there is a logical progression or development of a theme. Yours chop and change mid-stream, which often makes them indecipherable.

I'm surprised to learn English is your first language. I'm guessing it's not your only language tho. Do you also have a lesser-used mother tongue sitting there in the background by any chance?
 

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