Friend:  If you or anybody wants to be Read and Understood,  then you need to make a clear statement(s)....  This rambling does not make a clear case for you...  Make a statement and then try to stick with it...  Confusing and / or contradictory statements do not allow people to read and understand your point of view..... 

 So please, just try to make a clear statement, then stick with it....  I don't care which statement you make....  Some good writing advice....