Date:   2/14/2006 1:05:25 PM ( 18 y ago)
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URL:   http://www.curezone.org/blogs/c/fm.asp?i=993263

When you duplicated the words deep-deep & retreat-retreat it had the impact of making an echoing vibration in my inner ear. There was something magical about it. I almost wish I could have had another repeated word toward the end of your poem to give it that push it needed to send that echo out to the stars. I really enjoyed your poem. Your poet's voice comes through in a strong way.
 

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